I really love this magazine as it definitely shows what genre you have chosen. Being a huge EDM fan myself, this would easily be a magazine that I would buy. I admire how you have laid everything out. I also really like the effect you did on James on the double page spread, it looks awesome. Keep up the good work!
I really like and admire your first drafts! They look really professional and the amount on content on each page is just right. I also really like the way you have made James look on the double page spread - so effective!
I like your magazine a lot, it is different and captures your genre perfectly by the use of colour. It looks professional, tidy and well proportioned on all pages. Your article is well written and interesting. Great job- keep up the good work!
I love this design! the colours you have used are very effective and communicate the genre effectively as well as making the cover stand out well. The way you have highlighted the text on the front cover is effective and makes it stand out without taking the attention away from your main image/focus. Your contents page stands out and is really well structured and I like the way you have changed the image on your article piece, it's really eye-catching! However, I feel like you could try putting in an article name that introduces the interview as you have just used the name of the magazine again. This is a really good start, well done!
This is by far one of the best drafts! I really like the colour scheme you have used as it really shows what genre you are doing. you can clearly see that a lot of time has been spent on it as everything appears to be in place and it really does look professional. well done!
Extremely good draft. The colours and images fit together brilliantly with the theme of your magazine, great start!
This is an amazing draft! The colors all compliment each other well and by using florescent colors you have made your magazine look very realistic and similar to other Electronic Pop magazines. The affects on the photos are also really well done and make the magazine stand out even more because the style and colors of them are so eye catching.
The first draft attempt of your front cover has been brilliantly designed. Personally i would purchase this if i was to see it in a shop. I like the colour scheme, the images and the masthead. The layout on your contents page is also very well designed. You can clearly see that you have spread the content age into columns which is very good. The double page spread has also been designed very precisely. The attention to detail throughout is very impressive throughout the whole draft. The only thing which could be useful to the magazine would be to include different people rather than just 'DJ Greeno'.
This is an amazing first attempt, its a difficult one to do and I think you've pulled it off! The colour scheme is amazing and everything fits in brilliantly with each other. Cant wait to see the final product, well done !
this is an amazing draft magazine, I really like the colour scheme and how you have stuck with it throughout the whole magazine, as far as I can see there are no faults with this magazine. all round great magazine draft !
This is a brilliant draft magazine,it all fits together so well. Professional looking also
This first draft attempt is incredible. EDM is a genre that would have been extremely difficult to pull off but overall you seem to have mastered it perfectly. the fonts ans colors used help identify your genres easily and your main artist suits EDM very well. the only thing I think you could improve is fixing the cropping of 'SANG's' image because the original background is slightly visible. But overall, great first attempt, Well Done!
This first draft is really good. The cover goes well with your genre and the colours really stand out. The contents is laid out really well and I like the consistent theme of the coloured effect on each picture. The double page spread is detailed and laid out brilliantly and the effect used here looks great. Well done.
This is a really good first draft, the colour scheme works really well for your genre. The highlighted text on the front cover allows the text to stand out against the background. You could consider using a different model on your contents page as you have used them twice. Overall a good first draft!
This is a really good first draft. It is very clear how much time and effort has gone in to it and it has paid off. I like the colours, fonts and layout you have decided on as they match your genre really well. However to improve you could have more than one model and maybe have a variety of photos/backgrounds.
this is a very good first draft. its a diffcult genre to pull off and you have done it very well. the editing on your photos is excellent and adds variety as well as making it very eye catching. the colours used on your magazine cover are a good represntation of your genre as they are eye catching. i thnk the photo of Sang is very good as he looks good on your magazine. howver i would just re crop it to remove the small remains of the background. well done mate ;)