25 Word Pitch
Well pitched. I like the your choice of genre as it is different to everyone else's. Good luck Jay. I believe you can do it.
excellent pitch ! be more confident when pitching and good luck with creating your magazine, can't wait to see it !
Very original idea using dance music, good pitch but may be difficult to recreate effects. Good Luck.
Great pitch! I like the original idea, looking forward to seeing the finished project.
great pitch, style sounds good and original, good luck!
Clear genre and audience and a cleverly thought out market. Think about how you're going to recreate the bright, vibrant backgrounds as it might be difficult to achieve, good luck.
Very original idea that could pay of. think about how you can copy the style and look in the magazines you have used as examples.
This is a good choice of words to describe your magazine! Keep up the good work!
Great pitch! The word choice clearly portrays how you want the end product to turn out :)
Different idea here Jay! Very good idea and well explained but you can face some difficulties creating this magazine as it will be hard to make the cover to the best of its ability. You have an advantage of being able to get any model of any style for the cover. overall well done and good luck with your magazine, cant wait to see it!
I like the idea of an electronic dance magazine because it is different to the rest and not many people would have chosen it. The pricing is suitable for the audience however it may be difficult to create. I look forward to seeing the end result.
Great selection of words to describe your magazine. I can clearly visualise the product you are aiming to achieve. Good luck and keep up the good work!
You're genre stands out against the rest, as no one else has done this genre in this year. The pricing has been chosen well and the target audience has been chosen well for this magazine. However it will be hard to reproduce this kind of magazine as the backgrounds are always decorated with CGI, which you may struggle with. Good Luck.
Great Pitch! the genre you've chosen selcted stands out from the rest and I look forward to seeing it. I can clearly visulise what you will attempt to create. it wil be difficult but Good Luck! XD